tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-105357284781004481.post6747000974862458389..comments2023-09-08T16:51:16.712+05:30Comments on Memoirs...: Love and Forgiveness!Ashritahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12953310989204748747noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-105357284781004481.post-34651794599991222412009-06-26T20:34:04.473+05:302009-06-26T20:34:04.473+05:30Point taken Brosreview, and I noticed it does get ...Point taken Brosreview, and I noticed it does get prosey towards the end!Ashritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12953310989204748747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-105357284781004481.post-25534455596046561632009-06-26T03:50:30.105+05:302009-06-26T03:50:30.105+05:30Umm, it is nice to see someone writing a poem with...Umm, it is nice to see someone writing a poem without trying too hard to rhyme the ends. I am, frankly, sick and tired of such attempts. Ah well! <br /><br />I can sense the feel in this piece. However, I am really not sure of the insertion of moral facts in it. You could probably, express the same ideology in a poetic manner instead. It tends to get prosey towards the end. <br /><br />Good job! Make it great!Opaquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-105357284781004481.post-24370287370385726172009-04-27T11:26:00.000+05:302009-04-27T11:26:00.000+05:30the pic made me go 'aww"
n the poem made me go "aw...the pic made me go 'aww"<br />n the poem made me go "awwwwwwww".<br />mind blowing. am a fan.coffeeismypoisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05421534537554930676noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-105357284781004481.post-20872913912180666832009-03-31T02:40:00.000+05:302009-03-31T02:40:00.000+05:30hey vry nice description of one of the most import...hey vry nice description of one of the most important emotion of human life ........but guess it got to be much more than forgiveness only.......love has to do with caring,cathexes with love and above all self-sacrifice for the extension of ego boundaries...........all these elements in proper proportion complete this beautiful emotion that one can experience in lifeSorabh Tandonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508703708107539965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-105357284781004481.post-69705494697357605612009-03-29T12:35:00.000+05:302009-03-29T12:35:00.000+05:30Thank you so much Sulo :) I will definitely check ...Thank you so much Sulo :) I will definitely check it out in a bit :) Everyone gets better with time! Like I did...<BR/><BR/>Cheers!Ashritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12953310989204748747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-105357284781004481.post-26147120159036245772009-03-29T09:02:00.000+05:302009-03-29T09:02:00.000+05:30hey, i see that you are grt with poetry. The 1st t...hey, i see that you are grt with poetry. The 1st thing that i did after i read ur blog was to go back to mine n i posted few of my.. - i dont wanu call it a composition.. do chec that out n leme knw what u think - my fingers are crossed. :) <BR/><BR/>ps. am really not good at those atleast as of now :Psbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14179918888573602440noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-105357284781004481.post-48365348413525913992009-03-29T07:53:00.000+05:302009-03-29T07:53:00.000+05:30stumbled upon ur blog recently - loved it! this pi...stumbled upon ur blog recently - loved it! <BR/><BR/>this piece is too good as well :)sbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14179918888573602440noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-105357284781004481.post-8764580626336120792009-01-13T21:26:00.000+05:302009-01-13T21:26:00.000+05:30*bows* ... loved it :-) >:D< :-*ps: i dint r...*bows* ... loved it :-) <BR/><BR/>>:D< :-*<BR/><BR/>ps: i dint realise that i wasnt following yu.. :| .. reading all ur stuff today :| ..sowwie :(A.premhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15467691051005893222noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-105357284781004481.post-16513109906373547402009-01-11T11:17:00.000+05:302009-01-11T11:17:00.000+05:30Awww Kishore :) Thanks so much, it is an honor to ...<B> Awww Kishore :) Thanks so much, it is an honor to know that someone loves reading me so much :P<BR/><BR/>I hope you liked this poem BTW :)<BR/>Thanks again!<BR/></B>Ashritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12953310989204748747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-105357284781004481.post-37769558370709234482009-01-10T22:59:00.000+05:302009-01-10T22:59:00.000+05:30why u tried to make it short? we love to read u !!...why u tried to make it short? we love to read u !!! Satans Darling™ readers plz shout with me again and agin we love to read U !!!!!!!के सी https://www.blogger.com/profile/03260599983924146461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-105357284781004481.post-75421529604504380142009-01-10T18:11:00.001+05:302009-01-10T18:11:00.001+05:30Thanks a lot Nabs :) You know what your words mean...<B> Thanks a lot Nabs :) You know what your words mean to me :) </B>Ashritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12953310989204748747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-105357284781004481.post-32612834090619157182009-01-10T18:11:00.000+05:302009-01-10T18:11:00.000+05:30ya..we do regret ..but thats human nature....forem...ya..we do regret ..but thats human nature....foremost to every thing is the urge to be loved and we dont wanna lose that and that fear makes us do such things ....but then trust me Love is Supreme and our loved ones do understand that fear too........and these r tests which if pass we r true winners ...and all amazing ppl like u pass it :-)mysterious galhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09498778855432030397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-105357284781004481.post-74233763316622060452009-01-10T18:08:00.000+05:302009-01-10T18:08:00.000+05:30Thanks Annie!Thanks Nabs, thanks a lot. And yes it...<B> Thanks Annie!<BR/><BR/>Thanks Nabs, thanks a lot. And yes it is complicated na, we hide things from them and then we regret hiding them when they find out :P<BR/></B>Ashritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12953310989204748747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-105357284781004481.post-48467520957694853642009-01-10T18:05:00.000+05:302009-01-10T18:05:00.000+05:30i agree with nikhilUR best and the most amazing cr...i agree with nikhil<BR/><BR/>UR best and the most amazing creation :-)<BR/>it captures the rarest n truest feeling of a beloved <BR/><BR/>And ya i agree we do hide certain things but don't we even hide certain thoughts and we do out of love ...and its the fights and the realizations only which help to strengthen any relation<BR/><BR/>way to go girl<BR/>keep writing<BR/>love you loadsmysterious galhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09498778855432030397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-105357284781004481.post-22570728260064271542009-01-10T17:47:00.000+05:302009-01-10T17:47:00.000+05:30wow... *applause*wow... *applause*IceMaidenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08667516172075286778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-105357284781004481.post-78532463812817417412009-01-10T15:45:00.000+05:302009-01-10T15:45:00.000+05:30this is by far ur best creation!!keep it up!this is by far ur best creation!!<BR/><BR/>keep it up!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com