Beginning of a journey,
End of which lies after forever;
All the forces of nature
Unite in this celebration.
The fusion of two minds;
In the least, which are unlike each other,
Finally they arrive at one common place-
Unanimously rejoicing.
Love is the ultimate mixture of unstable stability.
Can you find anywhere else, this
Heart calming silence, Peace of the soul, yet the
Adrenaline rush, the war, the cry, the victory, the joy?
On every passing day, a brand new experience,
Such is this love, the most beautiful chaos!
P.S. I was reading a magazine the other day and I came across a painting names Beautiful Chaos. I knew that very instant that I had to write an acrostic on this one! Guess I am in love with Acrostic poetry these days ;)
25 comments:
most beautiful chaos.. what a nice way of putting it..
p.s. and i just love your template.. it is like wow!
love ka definition mast likihi ho...
#"Love is the ultimate mixture of unstable stability."
p.s : these days i'm able to understand some poems...hehe...
Thank you so much Kajal :D Hey I read on Neeraj's blog that you're unwell. Get well soon and wish me the same! :P
get well soon Oye Ashri,, kya bimaar ho gayi hai.. :( take care okies..
I try to keep my poems simple Neeraj! I am one of those who has trouble understanding a lot of poems haha
Yeah I'm trying to take care but it just seems to get worse!
WOW... for both the acro, and the template! :)
Thank you Leo ;)
You will make fall in love with Acrostic poetry. Will try one soon. :)
"ultimate mixture of unstable stability" Wonderful paradoxical description. Will keep visiting gal. Chao.TC.
ashhhhhhhhhhh...u keep coming up with acrostic after acrostic and i ll keep wowing and wowing ...damn u r good!!
There's absolutely no chaos in this piece of beauty..:)
luv
amith
I am so glad I WOW you Amit :)
Thank you so much Shwetha!
Love is the ultimate mixture of unstable stability - gosh from where do you get such insights ,... bow thee \m/ .... loved it
Infact according to chaos theory . chaos is not actually chaos at all but perfectly controlled.
Thank you Rags ;) I heard about the Chaos theory for the first time, let me go check it out!
Hi.. been a long time.. girl..
Your poetry has this kind of simplicity that is really charming.. Love ur poems girl. The idea of love portrayed.. in a very sublte manner..
Love it
SD- and i'm in love with YOUR acrostic poetry :)
I read the PS and then i read the poem again!! Ash, accept my bow.. its beautiful!! wow.. luv ya for this :)
u take care grl and have loadz of fun :)
Thank you LGL ;)
So glad you liked it Sawan :) You have fun too!
The last line from the first stanza is super-strong. That's definitely the show-stopper here. And, yes, of course, the phrase "beautiful chaos".
I reckon, I've seen the painting you're talking about. Very well-written.
For me, all details matter. I like how you've kept it simple. Instead of keeping the initial letters that start the line and establish this as acrostic poetry in bold, you've left it on the same level as others. That helps me understand or infer the entire piece in a different way.
Nicely done! Keep writing!!!
That was the idea Brosreview! Thanks for liking my work :)
Splendid connection you established between beautiful chaos and love. Enjoyed the narration :).
Thank you Brown Phantom!
FANTABULOUS! As I had mentioned earlier, I tried my hand at composing poems after six years on reading your amazing acrostics. This, as the rest of your poems, is awesome. Love the phrasings and the flow.
That is a huge compliment Mon :) Thank you so much
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