May 28, 2009
Expressive Silence
Empowered by plasticity;
Xeroxing the same smile on my face,
People wonder how could I be so perfect,
Realize they don't, such is not the case.
Empowered by ease;
Silence rests under this smile,
Still people fail to notice, but
It was her, she took shorter than a while.
Vortices of unsaid nothings-
Explosive silence, when our eyes met,
Soul sisters were a bookish concept,
In no time our eyes were wet.
Loud was this silence,
Ecstasy- no better it could get.
Never, My Soul Sister, had I experienced such a
Chaotic silence, The most
Expressive Silence.
When I thought of writing a guest post for Ms.R, I thought there was nothing better I could do than attempt an acrostic poem :P
It's an honor to know a woman who can dish out a masterpiece every time she starts to write something! May you have many more thousands of posts to come!
The perfect explanation for the poem is in the paragraph after Tan's poem below.
I wish Ms.R all the success and luck in here life,
God bless you and CM ji too :)
Love
Ashrita.
Cross-Posted @ Expressive Silence
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21 comments:
I want to give you one tight hug for this one! I loved it again and again on my blog and once again over here! You rock babe! Muahz!
Well done! I love the sophistication delivered via the big words weaved together. Keep it up!!! Strong, intense and powerful!!!
loved it as always...u know na how good ur ? :D
this was amazing as always :D
Love you Nabs :*
Brosreview,
I have started to look forward for your insightful and honest comments now!
I'm so glad you liked it! That's what matters the most Ms.R
Hugzzz
this reminds me of our joke that day. lol :P
you're brilliant with changing monotonous things into smthn magical :)
you write magically!!! :)
I loved this one..and welcome back!! where have you beeenn!!! ???
Thank you Aditi, and like I said on my other blog, I have been studying like crazy!
Apurva :P
Thank you so much!!
i loved this acrostic. beautifully expressed. :)
wow Ashritha, this is beautiful!! wut a way to do a guest post! the happiness is evident in Ms.R's comment! she even wrote it in bold!! :) good goin girl. u take care.
good one Ashri di :)
beautifully expressed!
its really amazing
chaotic silence! whoaaaa!!:) lovely
very expressive, reminds me some metaphysical poets. Nice one, keep blogging
loved it all over again !! R ko bilkul suit karti hai !!
I agree Prats! :)
Arhrita ,all poems from your side are so good ( this one is no exception )
may u get better with this art ( i know nothing about poems ).
whowwww that was amazing acrostic dear...and look at the pic, it looks so dangerously, gorgeously seductive....:))
that was amazing work.. loved it :)
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