May 28, 2009

Expressive Silence


Empowered by plasticity;
Xeroxing the same smile on my face,
People wonder how could I be so perfect,
Realize they don't, such is not the case.
Empowered by ease;
Silence rests under this smile,
Still people fail to notice, but
It was her, she took shorter than a while.
Vortices of unsaid nothings-
Explosive silence, when our eyes met,

Soul sisters were a bookish concept,
In no time our eyes were wet.
Loud was this silence,
Ecstasy- no better it could get.
Never, My Soul Sister, had I experienced such a
Chaotic silence, The most
Expressive Silence.


When I thought of writing a guest post for Ms.R, I thought there was nothing better I could do than attempt an acrostic poem :P
It's an honor to know a woman who can dish out a masterpiece every time she starts to write something! May you have many more thousands of posts to come!
The perfect explanation for the poem is in the paragraph after Tan's poem below.

I wish Ms.R all the success and luck in here life,
God bless you and CM ji too :)
Love
Ashrita.

Cross-Posted @ Expressive Silence

21 comments:

Ms.R. said...

I want to give you one tight hug for this one! I loved it again and again on my blog and once again over here! You rock babe! Muahz!

Brosreview said...

Well done! I love the sophistication delivered via the big words weaved together. Keep it up!!! Strong, intense and powerful!!!

mysterious gal said...

loved it as always...u know na how good ur ? :D
this was amazing as always :D

Satans Darling™ said...

Love you Nabs :*

Satans Darling™ said...

Brosreview,

I have started to look forward for your insightful and honest comments now!

Satans Darling™ said...

I'm so glad you liked it! That's what matters the most Ms.R

Hugzzz

Miss Sunshine said...

this reminds me of our joke that day. lol :P
you're brilliant with changing monotonous things into smthn magical :)

Aditi..............:) said...

you write magically!!! :)
I loved this one..and welcome back!! where have you beeenn!!! ???

Satans Darling™ said...

Thank you Aditi, and like I said on my other blog, I have been studying like crazy!

Satans Darling™ said...

Apurva :P

Thank you so much!!

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

i loved this acrostic. beautifully expressed. :)

sawan said...

wow Ashritha, this is beautiful!! wut a way to do a guest post! the happiness is evident in Ms.R's comment! she even wrote it in bold!! :) good goin girl. u take care.

Leo said...

good one Ashri di :)
beautifully expressed!

Meghaa said...

its really amazing

divsi said...

chaotic silence! whoaaaa!!:) lovely

ZiLliOnBiG said...

very expressive, reminds me some metaphysical poets. Nice one, keep blogging

Pretty Me!! said...

loved it all over again !! R ko bilkul suit karti hai !!

Satans Darling™ said...

I agree Prats! :)

neeraj_only said...

Arhrita ,all poems from your side are so good ( this one is no exception )

may u get better with this art ( i know nothing about poems ).

ARUNA said...

whowwww that was amazing acrostic dear...and look at the pic, it looks so dangerously, gorgeously seductive....:))

Amal Bose said...

that was amazing work.. loved it :)