Apr 22, 2009

My first 55 Fiction!


As the policemen took attendance that morning, every inmate answered back. Except one.

The warden arrived in Andy’s cell.

He tore out the poster of Andy’s glamor girl. He was shocked.


“HOW did he dig a Kilometer long hole?”



Andy’s effort of 19 years paid off, Thanks to that Rock Hammer.



Hope makes Impossible, Possible.







P.S. This was my first ever 55 Fiction, thanks to the inspiration and encouragement from Kajal and Neeraj. You guys rock! Love you both! And I know, it is not entirely original. I just could not help but realize that the epitome of the essence of this kind of composition has to be somewhere in the Shawshank Redemption!





26 comments:

mysterious gal said...

wow....u always arrive with a bang....and so did ur 55 fiction:D
and wow u conveyed the best optimistic message so perfectly in just 55 words...that's why i call u class apart always
and ya Hope surely makes everything possible ...even if it take time ...
Its the only thing which keeps us going!

Like all ur posts...loved it to the core :D

Satans Darling™ said...

Thank you Nabssssssssssss....

I am SO glad you liked it! :) :) :)

Love you! <3

The Pink Orchid said...

wow! it is perfect!! really.. :) positive.. with a shade of negative.. leaves one in thoughts..!! fantabulously marvelous! :D

neeraj_only said...

*smile on my face*

u made a story out of nothing and a message bhi...simply ur style ashrita!!.

hey! ashrita , have you watched "prison break" tv series?. After reading this that came into my mind. breaking out shown there is very stylish way.......hehe......if u haven't , try sometime when you have ample time to kill.

b4 closing 55fiction is so interesting :)

Pretty Me!! said...

loved this one !!! too good :)
and perfect message too !!

Nikhil said...

NAAAAIIIIIZZZZZZZZEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!

shawshank is my brainchild btw...

sawan said...

wow ashrita, story ke saath msg free!! nice :)

Ms.R. said...

Awww that was sooo nice! You're as good as a pro dear! Me Loved It!

sulo badri said...

presented the readers with a story n a msg.. grt ashrita :)

Satans Darling™ said...

Kajal,

All thanks to you girl ;) Thanks for inspiring me and helping me out :D

Satans Darling™ said...

Neeraj!!

I was soooo waiting for your comment! And here it is :) So glad you liked it. I did watch an episode or two of Prison Break. I would recommend you and everyone else to watch The Shawshank Redemption. The movie is sure to change something or the other in your life, in a positive way!

Satans Darling™ said...

Thank you so much Prats :)

Satans Darling™ said...

Nikhil, ya ya it's your brainchild! I recommend everyone to visit Nikhil's blog and read his amazing poetry on The Shawshank Redemption.

Here's the link!

http://brainfartsunplugged.blogspot.com/2009/02/hope.html

Satans Darling™ said...

Sawan,

I like giving a little something extra to my readers ;)

Story ke saath message free free free!

Thanks a ton for liking it!

Satans Darling™ said...

Ms. R

Thank you so much! A compliment coming from a Pro herself means a lot!

Satans Darling™ said...

Thank you so much Sulo Badri :)

Vani said...

Aww dats a nice fiction..
Good job! Do more.
That waz a perfect message in the end.

Miss Sunshine said...

lola! sahi tha!! i love 55 fiction, it's brilliant! LOL!

Satans Darling™ said...

I have started to love it too :) Wait for my next one!

Quirky Mon said...

Shawshank Redemption is my favorite movie. So to see a 55 word fiction piece based on it was nice.

My favorite quote in the movie is when Red says ,"I have to remind myself that some birds aren't meant to be caged. Their feathers are just too bright. And when they fly away, the part of you that knows it was a sin to lock them up does rejoice."

Aditi..............:) said...

Wow...yu are going places with your creative mind lady!! :)

Satans Darling™ said...

Quirky!

Yet another common trait! It is my favorite movie too! I remember that quote...

The movie made my life change, the way I looked at everything!

Satans Darling™ said...

Oh you really think so Aditi?! I am so glad! :D

Arv said...

its a start and I hope you try to experiment more with this genre... its been my fav one for sometime now :)

have a nice day... cheers mate...

padmaja said...

my first visit to your blog... and the way you write is amazingly impressive...just loved it!!

sraj said...

Shawshank redemption ..right?!... good anyway