Feb 23, 2009

Men


I have been waiting for over an hour,
I know he is always late,
The same excuses all the time,
Is that how people go out on dates?

The aroma of my steaming coffee
Makes me miss him all the more,
I find my head is hotter than my coffee,
I cannot take it anymore.

I fetch my cell outside my purse,
I dial his number at lightning speed,
He answers his phone after 30 seconds,
A good thrashing is what he needs.

I tell him I have had enough,
He always makes me wait,
It’s time I start to act more rough,
Or having Crème Coffees alone will increase my weight.

He lets me find a breather
Between my firing of breathless bullets,
And blames, and hurts, and words and anger.
He says, “Honey, I’m sorry, I got late.”

I cut the phone, I switch it off,
I pay my bill, I had my date!
I turn around, I scurry off,
He’s standing outside the gate.

I give him the most blank expression,
Blanker than the blankest paper,
He kisses my cheek and says “I love you”
And waves at the waiter.

I feel the melt inside my heart,
The hotter than coffee head
Is cooler than the ice cream inside its cart,
And the anger as good as dead.

We go back to resume the lost date
After I give him huge doses,
And the waiter this time gives in my plate
A couple of beautiful roses.

I look at his smiling face,
His eyes have twinkle in them,
Ladies, This is the story of Men,
You cannot live with them, You cannot live without them!

36 comments:

Twisted Elegance.... said...

LOL

Haha

Good one

And we cannot live without women either!

:)

Nikhil said...

AWESOME PIC!! lmaolpco...

This for me is your best work after that inspiration one!!
Rock on!!

Nikhil

R.V said...

Sigh! So true! Reminded me of Hot and cold by Kate Perry (I think thats her name :P) But this was better :D

mysterious gal said...

amazing totally amazing.....i just cant describe how i felt after reading it
Love ya :)

अविनाश said...

men will be men ...afteraall
loved reading it

Satans Darling™ said...

Thank you everyone :D

@ Twisted

Yeah, afterall, Men are from Mars and Women are from Venus :P

@ Nikhil
Thank you bhai but you're one in the making too now :D

@Rashi
I have not read it! But I will have a look now :)

@Nabs
Thank you baby, Love you too!

@Avinash
Yeah, Men WILL be Men :(... I think I should blog about this one too haha!

Riya said...

Hey.. Nice one.. Really liked it.. Specially those last lines.. Men will be men.. But yeh surely cant khud without them.. You made me remember some memories related to this thing.. Keep writing..

Vijayshryaln said...

loved it!!!!

Satans Darling™ said...

Thanks Riya :)

Vijayshryaln, Thanks for loving it :) And I have not seen you drop by here before, so thanks for dropping by :)

Both of you, keep visiting! :)

Miss Cynical ღ Åйu ღ said...

great post asshii.. :D
TOO GOOD pic!!!
mwwwahhh
LOVED it!

Satans Darling™ said...

Thank you Anu <3 Muahhh

Apurva said...

i love the pic! <3
:) it's an amazing poem!!

Anonymous said...

Awesomeness. Not a lot of us prefer to write about men. But guess some people are trendsetters. I like your style of poetry..and somewhere I believe its not fiction :D

Me.

Satans Darling™ said...

Thanks Apurva :)

And YOU...

Well it is a mixture of fiction and non fiction :D

Thanks for liking it you guys!

Ramu's Corner said...

I loved reading it. I swear it is really poetic! You deserve all the credits for this gud one!!

These petty fights among couples and the come backs are always interesting and very close to our hearts. In fact it is more romantic as well. You have captured every bit of it to the maximum extent. To describe it in one word, it is "Poetic".

Satans Darling™ said...

Thank you so much Ramu :) I think I have accomplished what I wanted to show in this poem after I have read this comment!

Pretty Me!! said...

wowie !!! as cute and sweet as the cadbury choclate !!! :D

really enjoyed reading it :)

Aditi..............:) said...

wow ....wat a poem...i loved it and couldnt agree more.....well its true...we cannot live without men....:)

Satans Darling™ said...

Thank you Prats :) Yeah I kept it simple!

Aditi, thanks so much for dropping by and liking my stuff, I am going to read your blog now :)

Kishore Choudhary said...

Ash its really nice one

Satans Darling™ said...

Thank you Kishore Ji :D Glad you liked it!

Vijayshryaln said...

No thanks No sorries.... I love being here actually!!!

Akansha Agrawal said...

It's really cute... and regardless of whatever men say... they ARE late for every meet-up!

And I totally agree with the last line...

Manjari Singh said...

Good one

Satans Darling™ said...

Thanks everyone :)

sawan said...

did i say i am loving this space.. well, the love is increasing with every passing post!

Satans Darling™ said...

I am so honored Sawan :)

Dream'R said...

hehe..beautiful!!...i can picture it...the rhymes make sense...its funny...so in totality...its LEGEN..wait for it...DARY!!...(if u dont watch "how i met your mother", that means its awesome!!)...

Satans Darling™ said...

Thank You Dream'R. And yeah well I did read your post on your blog about HIMYM and I can surely see the obsession! I have heard a lot about it. Guess I got some downloading to do :)

Mahadev Kapuskari said...

Hi...
Amazing...
I really like it.
You will be come up as a great poet.

Satans Darling™ said...

Thank you Mahadev :)

Shwetha said...

Well, real simple things described in a real simple way. and yeah, U cannot live with them or without them. Ha Ha :)

coffeeismypoison said...

This was so sweet and simple and TRUE! I too get tired of waiting sometimes..but when hes there, when he reaches...i dose him and then when he's appeared abashed...i hug him :o)

Brosreview said...

This section -

"And blames...
...outside the gate"

Ha! I was reading that super fast. I admire the manner you've written it. I can feel the frustration there.

Overall, a very fine piece, frankly. It is raw and honest and easy to relate as well.

Boys will be boys, aye?

Keep writing!!!

Brosreview said...

Is the image used drawn on Paint (or some similar application)?

I am just curious!

Satans Darling™ said...

Boys will be boys! Always! :P

This one, I have taken it from google images, but I have made a similar one in paint :D