LOLHahaGood oneAnd we cannot live without women either!:)
AWESOME PIC!! lmaolpco...This for me is your best work after that inspiration one!!Rock on!!Nikhil
Sigh! So true! Reminded me of Hot and cold by Kate Perry (I think thats her name :P) But this was better :D
amazing totally amazing.....i just cant describe how i felt after reading itLove ya :)
men will be men ...afteraallloved reading it
Thank you everyone :D@ TwistedYeah, afterall, Men are from Mars and Women are from Venus :P@ NikhilThank you bhai but you're one in the making too now :D@RashiI have not read it! But I will have a look now :)@NabsThank you baby, Love you too!@AvinashYeah, Men WILL be Men :(... I think I should blog about this one too haha!
Hey.. Nice one.. Really liked it.. Specially those last lines.. Men will be men.. But yeh surely cant khud without them.. You made me remember some memories related to this thing.. Keep writing..
Thanks Riya :) Vijayshryaln, Thanks for loving it :) And I have not seen you drop by here before, so thanks for dropping by :) Both of you, keep visiting! :)
great post asshii.. :DTOO GOOD pic!!! mwwwahhhLOVED it!
Thank you Anu <3 Muahhh
i love the pic! <3:) it's an amazing poem!!
Awesomeness. Not a lot of us prefer to write about men. But guess some people are trendsetters. I like your style of poetry..and somewhere I believe its not fiction :DMe.
Thanks Apurva :)And YOU...Well it is a mixture of fiction and non fiction :D Thanks for liking it you guys!
I loved reading it. I swear it is really poetic! You deserve all the credits for this gud one!! These petty fights among couples and the come backs are always interesting and very close to our hearts. In fact it is more romantic as well. You have captured every bit of it to the maximum extent. To describe it in one word, it is "Poetic".
Thank you so much Ramu :) I think I have accomplished what I wanted to show in this poem after I have read this comment!
wowie !!! as cute and sweet as the cadbury choclate !!! :Dreally enjoyed reading it :)
wow ....wat a poem...i loved it and couldnt agree more.....well its true...we cannot live without men....:)
Thank you Prats :) Yeah I kept it simple!Aditi, thanks so much for dropping by and liking my stuff, I am going to read your blog now :)
Ash its really nice one
Thank you Kishore Ji :D Glad you liked it!
No thanks No sorries.... I love being here actually!!!
It's really cute... and regardless of whatever men say... they ARE late for every meet-up! And I totally agree with the last line...
Thanks everyone :)
did i say i am loving this space.. well, the love is increasing with every passing post!
I am so honored Sawan :)
hehe..beautiful!!...i can picture it...the rhymes make sense...its funny...so in totality...its LEGEN..wait for it...DARY!!...(if u dont watch "how i met your mother", that means its awesome!!)...
Thank You Dream'R. And yeah well I did read your post on your blog about HIMYM and I can surely see the obsession! I have heard a lot about it. Guess I got some downloading to do :)
Hi...Amazing...I really like it.You will be come up as a great poet.
Thank you Mahadev :)
Well, real simple things described in a real simple way. and yeah, U cannot live with them or without them. Ha Ha :)
This was so sweet and simple and TRUE! I too get tired of waiting sometimes..but when hes there, when he reaches...i dose him and then when he's appeared abashed...i hug him :o)
This section - "And blames......outside the gate"Ha! I was reading that super fast. I admire the manner you've written it. I can feel the frustration there. Overall, a very fine piece, frankly. It is raw and honest and easy to relate as well. Boys will be boys, aye? Keep writing!!!
Is the image used drawn on Paint (or some similar application)?I am just curious!
Boys will be boys! Always! :PThis one, I have taken it from google images, but I have made a similar one in paint :D
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